Dear Soupy

Alright clothes first then. You need to work on your drapery cause what it looks like you're doing is putting you wrinkle lines in random places. You can get the jist of what you are trying to do but it isn't as believable as it could be after I send this I have a link you can follow that will give you some instruction if you want it.

Next is your anatomy. Her left arm is longer than her right arm is when they are at her sides they should be about at her thighs. Her hands are extremely tiny and made up of mostly fingers, there is very little hand there to speak of. Her face is faccing frontal, yes? Then the nose should follow suit. As it stands now she is facing forwardd with her nose sideways. Her right leg is also longer than her left and around the calf area it bends like she is Mr. Fantastic.

Study some anatomy books and ask me for that drapery link. You are progressing nicely from when we first met. Your posing is improving as she doesn't have her hands behind her back this time and your anatomy has improved overall as well. You learn fast and I know that you can get better at the things mention with time and practice.